neonfox3's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Zero Dragon ep.2]

I think this is really good.

I dont see why so many people criticise your movies so much.
I watched all of them and i think they're all very decent.

Nice Shading, Nice Animation (good mixture of FBF and tweening) Good Classic Fight Sounds (although i think there should be more ambient noises such as nature and crowds)

I like fighting games as much as the next guy and i dont really mind seeing many fighters thrown around into the mix.
I dont really care that you trace faces either. (as long as the animation is good which it is)

Only things you should improve on in my opinion is..
Voice Work and Lip Syncing.

great work! take my advice. and keeping makin' more!
-neon

[Android X-19]

great

Good movie, spooky setting and story. excellent twist and ending.
very good for a first COMPLETED flash. good job!
hope to see more.
-neon

[James Bond Surface Part 1]

ahhh the good ol' days.

Brings back such fond memories of me and my friends battling it out on the greatest game of its time.
Thank you Sir for doing that.
-neon

X-Aldin responds:

Hah! no problem, it is a classic game and thats one of the reasons we make these movies! thanks!

[Metal Gear Solid TPC 1]

From a Hardcore MGS fan.... Here goes...

Alright well
Story is pretty good and a decent Fan Fiction. (Although some scenarios were ripped from MGS2 and 3 but what can one expect if you're not Kojima himself)

Graphics are nice.. really nice. (Great art style)

Animation is pretty good although not much of it. (Seems like you used some kind of 3D program for the running cycle but i have no complains)

Sound.. well.. good and bad. it has Decent sound effects but laughable voiceovers (i honestly thought it was gonna be another MGS parody in which i actually am a fan of.. i recoment the NG Author BOE (crab battle) i think he's the best Snake Voice on newgrounds so far)

Overall 8. Good Job! Improve the voiceovers and some Animation.
-neon

[Trichinosis]

pfft riiiggghhht...

200 Billion on the war in Iraq? who gives a crap how much it is!?
|OUR|SAFETY|COMES|FIRST| (its not a very hard concept to grip)

our country was all christian when america was first founded but after a ton of countries started immigrating here left wing faggots start trying to change our traditions.
why?
cause other countries would be offended! (trying to change christmas trees to holiday trees, taking Jesus away from nativity scenes and putting animals in place of it, the list goes on and on)
if we tried to go to their countries and preach our beliefs we'd get beheaded. talk about hypocrites.
hey, what about the big name democrats who talk about polution yet they still drive those gas guzzlers (i say practice what you preach and drive an electric car!)
once again... hypocrites.
but on a helpfull note.
the animation, and graphics its self was fine. just try to make something less irritating to one party. -neon

[(2005)John Pinkerton]

sorry to say this but...

kinda boring..
the only thing i see you improving on is the sound and picture quality. i dare say your animation is getting worse and your humor is too.
all it was was claymen walking around and talking.
they really have no expression in the way they move and talk and everything. stiff movements i mean. you should trying animating them the way you do but have all of their motions come to a slow stop. (it gives it more of a realistic feel)
work on your voiceacting too cause its been kinda samey for about two years.
and they need more sound effects like a good footstep sound would make the world of difference.
but im not gonna totally lose hope cause im gonna watch your future projects even though you're not my favorite author anymore. so.. with that said. good luck on your future movies (alternate reality, that co author adult swim project and more internet shorts)
P.S. i did find the whole i gotta get through thing funny. -neon

[Liu Kang vs. Johnny Cage]

has goods and bads and ill tell you how to fix 'em

the goods
action figures: you animated them pretty well im not sure how you make them kick and stuff without them falling other then maby you use fishing lure or something sticky at the bottom of their feet
content: you have a good amount of mortal kombat items so it really gets the MK feel.
the bad
partialy animation: well they really didn't have much emotion in their motions like..
punching for instance: try few frames for the punch lunging and double the frames for the punch retracting
punch recieving when the guy gets hit: as soon as the fist connects with the body, the body should make a big advancement backwards (not to big though) followed by a small advancement
and then start recovering.
audio: you need sound effects badly
good flick try and improve take my advice. good luck!
if you have any questions just email me (its in my profile)
-neon

NoComicsComics responds:

Wow, a review from neonfox3. I love your work. Anyway, I really appreciate you taking the time to give me some pointers. I did try to put more motion into each hit, but I guess I need to work on that. As for the kicks and stuff, I used neadable eraser...It was really tough to work with, but with lightweight figures like those, it works great. Again, I'd like to thank you for your advice, and thanks for the review.

[Trash Has a Seizure]

uhh.. so sick of clocks and locks

bad just bad and really sick of this stuff the only thing i can say good is you animated it well but c'mon its locks! soooo sick of it. at least record voicovers people. i dont know the history of these things but they are really annoying sorry but try something more innovating next time
-neon

StarLock responds:

Don't play with matches kids.

[Bush Thinking]

no.....just no...

i'll bet if i posted this submission exactly a week earlier then you but casted bill clinton or john kerry as the retard
it would get bad reviews.
people would call me a redneck, tell me to do my sister, and maby even blam it.

you bunch of hypocrites..

P.S. so i wont be abusing the reviewing system completely...
animation is kinda good, sound is fine, and graphics are bad
try to work on something that everyone can injoy.

-neon

[Sprite Survivor - 7]

i vote Angela

pretty good story you got there
i remember watching no. 6 like 6 months ago.
fighting is improved which is good also. overall good.
-neon

Hell-Fire responds:

Angela

Thanks a lot. I do try to improve every time.